談到傾聽，我想到搶救雷恩大兵的一段電影對白，我ㄧ直玩味再三，藉此拋磚引玉，為忠於原著，引用英文原文，中文翻的不好，還請學長們海涵和指正：
1 x1 ]. B D6 k+ X: BPrivate Jackson: Sir... I have an opinion on this matter.(長官，我對這件事<指搶救雷恩大兵>有不一樣的想法)
$ u6 t. v: ?9 j% s3 s: e7 JCaptain Miller: Well, by all means, share it with the squad. (你當然可以和弟兄們分享你的想法。)+ E( w4 U4 X# c0 n. \9 a0 l% w
Private Jackson: Well, from my way of thinking, sir, this entire mission is a serious misallocation of valuable military resources. (長官，按照我的想法，這個任務是寶貴軍事資源的錯置。)1 N( @& V3 O& {& q, w% y* y+ K
Captain Miller: Yeah. Go on. (是的，繼續講。)
- x" g' w% B& h1 t7 B+ n XPrivate Jackson: Well, it seems to me, sir, that God gave me a special gift, made me a fine instrument of warfare. (長官，就我而言，上帝給了我特別的天賦，我是一個絕佳的戰爭工具。)
* c0 \$ [6 w5 E! ECaptain Miller: Reiben, pay attention. Now, this is the way to gripe. Continue, Jackson. (Reiben，你注意聽，這就是訴苦，Jackson，繼續講。)
) [4 ?& W) h, `7 k* F3 Y/ CPrivate Jackson: Well, what I mean by that, sir, is... if you was to put me and this here sniper rifle anywhere up to and including one mile of Adolf Hitler with a clear line of sight, sir... pack your bags, fellas, war's over. Amen. (長官，我的意思是，假如你把我放到希特勒附近一哩處的任何地點，只要在清楚視線下，長官，可以打包囉，也就是戰爭結束了，阿門。)' q3 H j7 d S* ?/ U/ [& n
Private Reiben: Oh, that's brilliant, bumpkin. Hey, so, Captain, what about you? I mean, you don't gripe at all? (噢，鄉巴佬，那太棒了，喂，上尉，那你呢，我的意思是你都不會訴苦嗎?)
' A: o3 v3 j7 |! d+ F- P) M' q5 g2 Y& cCaptain Miller: I don't gripe to *you*, Reiben. I'm a captain. There's a chain of command. Gripes go up, not down. Always up. You gripe to me, I gripe to my superior officer, so on, so on, and so on. I don't gripe to you. I don't gripe in front of you. You should know that as a Ranger. (Reiben，我不會向你訴苦，我是上尉，有指揮體系在，訴苦是往上級，而不是往下層，一向如此啊，你向我訴苦，我再向我的上級長官訴苦，以此類推上去，我不會向你訴苦，也不會在你面前訴苦，身為突擊隊員，你應該了解這點。)+ S* M5 k: ~" `; @0 r% d
Private Reiben: I'm sorry, sir, but uh... let's say you weren't a captain, or maybe I was a major. What would you say then? (對不起，長官，但假如你不是上尉，而我是少校時，你又將會怎們說。): }6 Q3 H) i/ O: I
Captain Miller: Well, in that case... I'd say, "This is an excellent mission, sir, with an extremely valuable objective, sir, worthy of my best efforts, sir. Moreover... I feel heartfelt sorrow for the mother of Private James Ryan and am willing to lay down my life and the lives of my men - especially you, Reiben - to ease her suffering." (在這種情況下，我會說：「長官，這是一個很棒的任務，任務目標非常有價值，值得盡我所能去完成，而且，我對Private James Ryan的母親感到最深的哀慟，我將付出我和弟兄們的生命，特別是Reiben的命，去減輕她的痛苦。」)6 P% c: n6 m% u B( U
Mellish: He's good. (他是好樣的。); G$ v0 q" d1 }3 x# F8 R0 j z
Private Caparzo: I love him.(我愛他。) |
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